Thursday, March 15, 2012

The right way to write; Paragraph 3


Today's Tip – The right way to write; Paragraph 3 -

Our last paragraph, which is our first important step in leaving a lasting first impression, has finally come. This paragraph is more important than the second, and has more power than the first. Reason, this is all about them and their future, and your goodbyes. It's also the last thing your intended reader(s) will see. Like, in sales, you want to say your name last. “Hello, thank you for calling BBR Productions, how can I help you, this is Thomas.” Anyone who is anyone will know, that comes out of me like clock work!

When writing take note to what your first paragraph had. You can link these two paragraphs together or just considerate other events outside what you had already mentioned. I like to dedicate this to a positive send off, to show the person(s) a selfless side. Giving them an encouraging peek into why working with you is a great venture. A nice little secret is keep the writing to a simplistic effort. To smart sounding and you might lose your reader(s). Of course, too simplistic has the same effect. Use basic words, with a smart approach.

Below is an example of someone writing paragraph three to BBR Productions Inc.

I am happy to also see your work with Martyrd has lead them to another level. I am excited to see BBR Productions Inc. involvement with (another client) in the coming months. As I saw on your website you are involved in a few more development projects in many other areas. I wish you a grand year, and may all your ventures continue moving forward with success!

A sign off is important too. Be something more than generic. Add your personality to it. Your sincere personality to your goodbye.

Peace in harmony, until again...
Full Name
Company Name (if you have one)
Contact Number
Website


www.BBRProductions.com
www.Facebook.com/BBRProductions
www.Twitter.com/BBRPro

www.MakeARightLeftHere.com
www.Facebook.com/Altayon

www.NYCBM.com
www.ChaseTheMusic.Net
www.Martyrd.com
www.TwitchTwitchProductions.com
www.Facebook.com/Outiside.Perception
www.SomethingPlanet.com
www.DanSorber.com
www.Facebook.com/OfficialAlanBaltesPage

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